Hello everyone its Michael Reed again with my second blog post
Overall, how did your group's pitch go-- reflect and evaluate? Is your message of public/community interest? Who is your target audience and how wil yu form/style appeal to them?
My pitch is on depression and here a brief definition:Depression is a state of low mood and aversion to activity that can affect a person's thoughts, behaviour, feelings and physical well-being. Depressed people may feel sad, anxious, empty, hopeless, helpless, worthless, guilty, irritable, or restless. They may lose interest in activities that once were pleasurable, experience loss of appetite or overeating, or problems concentrating, remembering details or making decisions; and may contemplate or attempt suicide. Our pitch went really well:it was well thought through and most importantly we took a different approach then our other classmates. Yes, our message is public and community interest because it can happen to anyone; famous or common person and it has affect millions people over the years. It will have a great hook and it will not be so long because people can be easy turn off if a subject is too long.
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